Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
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this
is a normal experience in
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apply
this
days. Correct determiner usage
these
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, we have a Correct your spelling
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massmarket
. With the influence of Correct your spelling
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the mass
people
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look
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and wears
wears
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wear
same looking
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same-looking
clothes
, that is
less expancive
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expansive
expensive
then
the Correct your spelling
than
branding
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clothes
. I think there may be a
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reason
for that. Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
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of all - peaple
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people
a
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apply
brand
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brand's
clothes
simply just like Change preposition
of clothes
this
brand, how the brand clothes
look and material
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the material
the
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was
made of. Change the verb form
were
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,
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may be
that these Correct your spelling
maybe
people
just want to show-off
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show off
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always care about other peaple
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people
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opinions
trying
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try
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expancive
cars - Correct your spelling
expansive
expensive
i
think that there`s no problem with that. If you can afford Change the capitalization
I
some
luxury car - you need to do it. Expensive cars have comfortable sitchairs, they are fast and Correct determiner usage
a
looks
better Correct subject-verb agreement
look
then
the common cars on the road.
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than
buyind
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buying
a
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an
expencive
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expensive
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
items
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item
based
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is based
viability
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the viability
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always think that the more expensive item is - then
it`s better, but mostly they`re wrong. You can always find a less expensive item that works better then
the other ones. It`s only Replace the word
than
matter
of Correct article usage
a matter
the
interest and Correct article usage
apply
also
marketing. Diffirent
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company
always Fix the agreement mistake
companies
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try to tell you that Correct your spelling
will
they
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their
product
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produce
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another company`s product.
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i
think that there is Change the capitalization
I
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nothing
ar
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or
people
spend more money they
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suppose
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supposed
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why
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