You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest. Include: Why you are writing Your suitability for the role How you would approach the position

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Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to apply for the position of property

mananager

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manager

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advertised in The Sunday Times newspaper on 05/01/2022. I have a passion

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excellent management

skill

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and currently, I am working as a residence

manger

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manager

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Shangrila hotel and have

experience

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the

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similar field over

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apply

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15 years. I have a Business

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degree

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Colombo

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campus and some trade qualifications as well.

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, under my

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the

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more profit because I adjust some possible changes in the system.

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year

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nominated me as

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employment

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of the year because of

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, I hope your

company

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get more benefit

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my experience. whether you offer

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that position I could do my best to bring you

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our

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company

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best

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of the year in Sri

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. I look forward to

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from you. Yours Faithfully, Sam.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both sides.

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