Many governments think that economic grow is their most important goal. Some people, however, thinks that other type of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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People have different opinions about whether regimes should focus on the economy or other important aspects of a country. Personally, I agree with the latter view because other improvements are important

instead

of focusing on one factor. Some individuals agree with the economic aspect because of some possible reasons .

First

of all, when authorities emphasize more towards the economic section of a nation,

then

individuals will get more job opportunities after completing their academics and get a chance to become independent in their lives .

As a result

, adults become able to raise their standard of living .

Secondly

gradual

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a gradual

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rise in

economy

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the economy

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helps the nation to become

weathier

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wealthier

healthier

and

famous

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more famous

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among all other nations .

Also

, the citizens of developed countries are

well settled

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in their lives.

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