You borrowed something from your friend, later it got damaged. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • apology about the issue • tell how it got damaged • say you are going to fix this issue

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Dear Joy I am glad to know that you are selected for the international chess competition in London. how are your preparations for the championship? I wanted to say sorry to you for damaging the

book

that I borrowed from you

last

week. I know how important it is to you to use it

this

semester and the semester assessment will be conducted

month. I have completed taking notes from the text and I kept them on my study desk,

unfortunately

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the ink fell down on the

book

and it got damaged. The ink spread all over the

book

and it’s become unreadable. I have checked with the local bookshops for the

book

and it’s not available any were, but I purchased the

book

online and it will be delivered

this

weekend. If you are coming to Jennifer’s birthday party on Sunday, I will hand over the

book

. Best regards Mai

Submitted by ck.manshad on Wed Dec 28 2022

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