You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in a European country in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The pie charts below depict the gadgets used by teenagers in a European country between the ages of 18 and 25 to watch TV in the 10-year period from 2007. In general, it can be seen that the percentage of devices mostly has an upward trend, and there is a transition for the most used between the conventional

TVs

in 2007 to the flat screens in 2017. In 2007, tablets were the least used.

Nevertheless

, after 10 years, the pattern changes when the conventional

TVs

were at the bottom.

According to

the data, in 2007, the device that was most used was the conventional

TVs

, with a rate being over a third. The mobile phones, desktop computers and laptops had a nearly equal percentage (about a fifth), respectively 15%, 18% and 20%. The flat-screen

TVs

just accounted for under a tenth, about 8%. And the tablets, which were the least used, took 5%.

However

, in 2017, there were many significant changes in the percentages.

Initially

, the conventional televisions from the most used became the least, with the percentage decreasing from 34% to 4%.

Furthermore

, the percentages of flat screens, mobiles and tablets

also

changed rapidly, respectively 27%, 26% and 19%. The desktop computers and laptops had percentages dropped from nearly a fifth to a little more than 10%.

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