Some people believe that it is good to shere as much information as possible in scientific research, bussiness, and academic world, others believe that some informations is too important or to valuable to share freely.

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, business and the academic earth is good to be shared, which was always debatable

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and has become more controversial. While concerns about the issue are on the rise, persuasive arguments in favour of the subject matter

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openly when it is possible to copy and available data is a blessing for any human being and people love to know easily anything are the two justifications that will be emphasised in

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Some people believe that it is good to shere as much information as possible in scientific research, bussiness, and academic world, others believe that some informations is too important or to valuable to share freely.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?