A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. she is planning to stay with you, but you can not accomodate her. write a letter to her tell her the reasons apologise make alternative arrangements

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Dear Sejal, Greetings ! I hope you are pink in your health. I am really very happy by hearing you are coming to India at the end of

this

month. I am writing

this

letter to apologize to you because I am not able to stay you with me. Let me explain the reasons.

Firstly

, There is the price of house rent is increasing day by day. So, we are living in a very small place nowadays. We are three girls living in a very small apartment. There is only one bedroom with a kitchen only and we have only three beds and not much more facilities

such

as TV, A.C. and many more in my small apartment. According to me, You will not feel comfortable with me.

Furthermore

, my home is very far from the city area which takes 2

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shopping or explore new areas of my city. I really feel sorry for giving excuses but you know my nature. According to me, you are coming to India after 5 years and you should stay in a very comfortable place which provides all facilities. If you do not mind living with my other friend Sonal, Who is living in the city area. She is living in two bedroom flat with two girls only. So, you can get your own personal with good facilities. I know her very well, you will definitely enjoy her company as well as I will

also

come for a few days to stay with you. I am waiting for your earliest reply for arranging accommodation for you. Regards, Rashmi

Submitted by jani_rashmi on Tue Dec 13 2022

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A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. she is planning to stay with you, but you can not accomodate her. write a letter to her tell her the reasons apologise make alternative arrangements

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