These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are reasons for this and how could the problem be solved?

Today, with the emergence of many new curious occupations, teaching has been a less attractive job in many places of the world. As a consequence, the trend of becoming educators is declining day by day.
This
essay will discuss why
this
might be the case and how
this
problem can be alleviated. One of the main causes of the problem is that the monthly salaries of the teacher are very poor compared to other jobs. They earn differently even if they are in the same field. Actually, an average programmer will earn far more than an average teacher of computer science.
Furthermore
, teachers overwork
additionally
without pay,
for example
, in the evening,
instead
of resting, they check notebooks at home or return home late at night because they have a huge amount of tasks for one day. The solution to the state is to increase salaries and offer the best working conditions to attract people. Another significant aspect is constant work pressure and long working hours. Educators often work till evenings teaching children in schools with short breaks, but
this
schedule causes a person to experience enormous stress,
therefore
, productivity and desire to work decrease. They do not get enough time to spend with their family or their hobby. Increasing the number of teachers and equal distribution of the workload can eliminate
this
problem. Transferring knowledge to the
next
generation is the mission of every previous generation. And in
this
system teachers play an essential role. And it's sad that
this
profession is so devalued. But I hope soon people will realize the value of
this
profession and teaching will again become one of the most respected and valuable professions.
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