One of your neighbour's children has accidentally broken the front window of your car.

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Dear Sir/Madam. I am your upstairs

neighbor

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neighbour

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.My name is Suhrob.I am writing

you

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to you

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about

happened

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the happened

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accident by your

children

.Cause of my letter to you that you went

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on a

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long business trip.I would chat with you about it

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apply

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face to face but you are not at home.I was at home yesterday evening after work.Suddenly, I heard my

car

's alarm

after

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and after

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that I looked at the bottom of the flat there were some

children

were punching near my

car

then

I immediately went down.Let's look at

with

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it with

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my eyes, my

car

's window was broken.There was nobody after

broken

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the broken

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window.I did not want to call the police for

this

condititionand

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condition and

I tried to find

children

who had broken my

car

's front window.Investigations have shown that the

children

are your

children

.I want you

fix

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it within three days.I hope you

immadiately

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immediately

eliminate it.

Respectly

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Respectively

Respectfully

Respect

, Suhrob.

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One of your neighbour's children has accidentally broken the front window of your car.

Fully explain your ideas

Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree?

Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The chart gives us information about the physical activity done by Austrailian men and women

Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Traditional medicines, such as herbal remedies and acupuncture, are very popular in some countries. Those who practice traditional medicines claim that it is better than modern medicine in maintaining and improving health. Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?