In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What do you think are the causes of this development and what measures could be taken to solve it?

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Many indigenous celebrations are being forgotten by the present

generation

. The main reason for

this

is the lack of awareness about these traditions among the younger

generation

. It is the duty of the authorized parties to take necessary actions to teach the value of these festivals to

children

Children

nowadays are addicted to the sophisticated technology-based lifestyle and have fewer chances to learn about their own ethnic values. School syllabus is

also

becoming increasingly advanced and pays less attention to teaching

children

about history and traditions.

On the other hand

children

do not spend enough quality time with their grandparents to learn about these cultural values.

For example

, research conducted by a University in England revealed that

children

who spend time with their grandparents score better in history subjects compared to

children

who are separated from their older relatives. As

such

educating

children

about the significance of traditional festivals is vital as they are the link to pass

this

inheritance to the

generation

. In light of

this

understanding, when the celebration season comes, responsible parties can combine with schools and can arrange suitable activities for

children

to get a proper understanding of the celebration.

For example

, Sinhala-Hindu new year is a very traditional festival celebrated by many generations of Sri Lankans. During the season, countries' schools instruct

children

to come to school dressed in ethnic costumes and in the classrooms, together with their teacher they conduct a mock festival similar to the one that was conducted by ancient families. Many valued indigenous festivals are about to get vanished from the world due to less appreciation of these traditions among the young

generation

Hence

, immediate measures should be taken by the governments to popularize these so that many generations to come can enjoy and value those.

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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What do you think are the causes of this development and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In today’s society, both Western medicine and traditional, complementary forms of medicines are now widely known and used. The effectiveness oft kinds of treatment is determined by the patient's mental attitude towards it.

When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programmes) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion?

In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can the governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?