Many nowadays prefer online education to face to face education. Do you consider this a positive or a negative development?

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Many nowadays prefer online education to face to face education. Do you consider this a positive or a negative development?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

Advantages and disadvantages of using products which made by another country.

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Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.