Smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among toung people, with potentially serious effects on their health. Explain some reasons for this problem and suggest some possible solutions.

Nowadays,
tobacco
is being smoked greatly by the young age group’s
people
for a variety of reasons. Fortunately, we have a number of solutions to
this
problem. In
this
essay, I will explain
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reasons
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smoking and recommend some possible solutions. The
first
major reason is young
people
’s accessibility to
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smoking zone. As we know, they can smoke
tobacco
wherever they want due to the fact that there are a large number of smoking areas near the places where youngsters spend their most leisure time.
Therefore
, we should reduce the number of these areas and amend the
Tobacco
Control Laws.
For instance
, it is possible to increase the amount of bill which is paid, if someone smokes near prohibited places. I think it will work effectively. Another major reason is unawareness of the dangers of
tobacco
which may exist in the future. They do not worry about its harmful effects. Because dangers are not diagnosed directly after smoking.
Thus
, we need to educate youngsters more effectively through
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lesson and school activities.
Although
some lessons related to
tobacco
are taught in schools, it does not work well. It means we should change our teaching style.
For example
, in my opinion, observing some experiments which detect the danger of smoking can influence youngsters’ minds.
Furthermore
, we cannot ignore peer pressure which is one of the causes of young
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smoking. Especially, for adolescents
people
, friends and peers are the most significant part of their life. Most young
people
who use cigarettes start smoking because of peer pressure and suggestion. The solution to
this
reason is that parents teach their children how to make friends correctly and say ‘NO’ when they suggest or force. In conclusion, there are many reasons why young
people
are smoking
tobacco
significantly and we should do something to solve
this
problem before something goes wrong.
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