Some people claim that newspaper is the best way to get latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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people
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newspaper
is the best
way
to collect
latest
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information
as it is more fruitful than other forms of media. Whereas, some
people
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different aspect about
this
idea. I personally believe that nowadays other platforms are more
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than
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.
First
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I will present some aspects. On the one hand,
people
believe that other forms of media are more useful than
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because to read
newspaper
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one should need proper
time
and place where he can sit and collect
information
but as
per
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today’s fast
life
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no one has enough
time
to read
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the newspaper
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newspaper
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. Everyone is in hurry to reach their respective places on
time
.
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an individual who travels daily by car will always prefer to utilise that
time
while
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the radio. On the other hand, many
people
are agree
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with
this
statement for many reasons but I believe that only
people
of old age might
be agree
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with
this
statement. As in ancient
times
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there were no other facilities to get daily news.
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was the only
way
. As well as
people
from old times
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not
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knowledge to operate new media resources
such
as Television, mobile phones, radio etc.
This
could be the reason they find
newspaper
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the newspaper
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is the best
way
to
way
to get
information
. At
last
,
newspaper
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might be the best
way
to get
latest
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the latest
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information
but
daily
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life schedule of
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today.’s generation should not be ignored.
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