Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. why do many working people not get enough exercice? what can be done abot this problem?

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of UK adults of different

age

groups who surfed on the internet over a 3-year period. Overall, it can be seen that the

age

group

16-24 is the most dominant one over the whole time period.

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, adults ages 25-44 and 55-64 are both experiencing progress over the 4 years. Looking at the details, every year for the 16-24

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was above 80%,

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even reaching a high of 90%.

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the

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place, the 25-44 adults are all above a percentage of 50, showing a significant increase over the years.

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, 55-64 aged people appear to have the same pattern with a sharp incline in the usage of

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. Moving to a more detailed analysis, the 25-44

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started from 50% in 2003, following a result of 80 in 2006

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of 65+ did not even

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internet

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but began doing it only in 2004.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. why do many working people not get enough exercice? what can be done abot this problem?

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You have to travel from on place to another write a letter to the bus director for a Travel Permission l

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that youngster should take part time job while study in university. Do you agree or disagree.

An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?