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The line graph illustrates the information referring to the amount of money earned by three bakeries in Calgary over a 10-year period Overall, it can be seen that the annual earnings for the bolo
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the
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bakeshop declined steadily with the lowest point at 40000. Looking at the details, the
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fluctuated at 57.000 for 5 years in a row, afterwards grew suddenly reaching a high peak of 104.000. The bolo
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similar pattern over the years, with a starting point of 20.000 reaching 40.000 eventually in 2007. There was a gradual rise in yearly income to a number of 65.000.
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a totally different direction. The yearly income stood at 80.000 in 2000 fluctuating till the year
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2004 followed by a significant dip to finish
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at 40.000 in 2010.
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