A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her pn your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Thank him/her for the invitation - explain why you cannot come - give him/her your other news

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Dear Rahul, I hope you are doing well. I'm writing to apologize that I'll not be able to visit you during

upcoming

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summer break. I've been thinking to meet you for a long time now because it's been 4 years since I have hung out with you, Aditi and your lovely kid.

However

, thanks to social media, I have all the updates about your life. I can'

thank you enough for inviting me to your place in Canada. I really wanted to visit you during

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the next

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holiday, but I won'

be able to do so. Recently,

I've

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changed my job and right now I have

probation

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period of 6 months. During

this

time, I am not allowed to take long leaves, unless

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apply

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it's an emergency. Travelling

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abroad during

such

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time would put my job at risk. So, I would only be planning my trip to some nearby

hill-station

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. The

thing I'm going to tell you will blow your mind. It's actually

a good news

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that

year I'm going to get married. The date and other details

hasn'

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been finalized yet,

however

, I will keep you posted on that.

This

goes without saying that you have to attend my wedding along with your family, and I won'

be listening to any excuse for

this

. Let's

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catch up

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catchup

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sometime over a video call as you

also

must be having lots of

thing

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to share. Best wishes, Aman

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