Write a letter to your favourite restaurant. Include the following: – Your reason for writing – What you like about the restaurant – Suggestions for improvement. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Fidan Durrani and I am a food blogger. I visit different restaurants and eateries to review their food, ambience and overall experience.

Furthermore

, I visited your restaurant La Kuchina situated in Jehan-Numa Palace hotel

last

Sunday and really loved the dinner and service provided. I am writing to you to share the experience I had at the restaurant, what I loved about it and a few suggestions for improvement.

First

of all the quality and taste of the meal served were absolutely amazing and the chefs were very attentive to the particular requirements of the diners , some of them had allergies while others were interested in having vegan options. All the requirements were fulfilled keenly and the flavour was not at all compromised. The value of food was

also

fair enough. A few suggestions I like to make are, there should be more space in the dining area as it was just a bit congested

moreover

hampering the service.

In addition

this

, ventilation can

also

be improved because of the open ,kitchen it was quite hot in the restaurant. I will definitely visit again. Yours sincerely, Fidan Durrani

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Write a letter to your favourite restaurant. Include the following: – Your reason for writing – What you like about the restaurant – Suggestions for improvement. Write at least 150 words.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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