Because most information about culture and history canbe found on the internet today, museums are not necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Man kind
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from the beginning of life recorded important events, creations and beliefs and passed them on to the
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generations, with different methods from a scratch on a cave wall to the internet. looking back to our ancestors' heritage is
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beneficial
benefitial
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beneficial
for our
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development
developement
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development
. The invention of the
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internet
internent
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internet
has changed the world and the way we think, it has simplified life
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a lot
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and brought people together, it has an effect on every aspect of life,
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of information about history is on the internet making it easy to fetch by anyone looking for it.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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