You recently did a short cookery course.The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Writing a letter to the course director at the cookery school.Hn yoour letter . describe what you enjoed about the course . say how much cooking you have done since the course . suggest another cookery course you would like the school to offer

#cookery #course #school #feedback #director #hn #yoour #offer

I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to you regarding

this

term cookery.

To begin

with, I should say I am fascinated by your course because I could learn a lot of things from you and that was amazing for me.

Moreover

, during the

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cycle I was cooking very so I know I could ask a question if I had a problem.

For example

, I realized that free ingredients are entirely vital to cook.

Furthermore

, I want to give a suggestion for another cookery and that we want to learn more cooking international food at the school and we can improve our experience with your knowledge so

that is

completely catchy for us.

However

, I know

this

aim needs to have a plan.

For instance

, you should find the best international food of is suitable to our culture. Writing to your reply. Your Faithfully, Saeed Sam.

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