You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with your hotel room. Write to the hotel manager. In your letter… - Tell the manager about the problems you had - Explain to them how you feel about what happened - Let them know what actions you would like them to take.

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Hi Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you about one problem that I faced when I used your hotel facility. I am coming to your city for my business, and

also

I really need to use the

phone

for my business contact. I have noticed your

phone

not working. I am nervous because I should have some necessary calls to many companies and

also

I don have sufficient time for

this

topic.

furthermore

, a big part of my work going to solve by

phone

. I know about electronics and I found the

phone

's problem. likely

this

is related to their mic because people can not hear my sound. if you find a mic I can change it or I can buy that. please let me know about your decision. I am in a hurry for repairing

this

device. I am looking forward to hearing your answer. Yours sincerely. Sad.

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