You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with your hotel room. Write to the hotel manager. In your letter… - Tell the manager about the problems you had - Explain to them how you feel about what happened - Let them know what actions you would like them to take.

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Dear Mr Sharma, I am one of the guests of your hotel who used your facilities

last

week. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I am very dissatisfied with the services of your hotel room. The main issue was the water heater which did not work properly. Other than that even the basic amenities

such

as a garbage box were not provided.

Further

, when I asked for the housekeeping services the staff didn't show up. I really felt disappointed about my choice of hotel when I had to face these problems. I hope you understand how difficult it is in

such

cold weather to live without a geyser.

Moreover

, on my arrival itself, the room was not cleaned and I had to stay in an un-hygienic place for two days. I would like you to look into the services of your property and take appropriate action on a timely basis. You should train your staff in advance regarding the hospitality feature as well. I hope you would consider my letter as a turning point for your future guests. Yours faithfully, Sneha

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You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with your hotel room. Write to the hotel manager. In your letter… - Tell the manager about the problems you had - Explain to them how you feel about what happened - Let them know what actions you would like them to take.

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