You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months • say how your work could be done while you are away • ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Sir/Madam, Myself Niranjan having ID.No: 1272924. I am currently working as a Senior Cloud Engineer in our Organisation in Bangalore Branch in India.

Firstly

, I have made specific Proposals/Estimations per the client's requirement, which I would like to discuss directly with them and give a presentation related to that with appropriate graphics. I need direct interaction to convince the client to accept the proposal, as there are multiple graphics to explain. I want to

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for at least six months in our Head Office in the USA as it will allow me to interact with our clients, understand their requirements very clearly, and improvise the proposal.

Secondly

, it will enable me to improve my Technical

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and soft skills. I want to perform my duties in a different

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exposure for the time being in the coming year. I have trained Mr Sumanth, to

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behalf of me until I come back,

in addition

, I can be in the loop, even though I am working at the head office So, please consider my proposal and allow me to

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in our Head Office for at least two Quarters in the coming year. Thanks & Regards, Niranjan Reddy K

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