Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest?
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the
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non-smoker
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buy
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buying
lose
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losing
money
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of money
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a worse
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destroy their lung, money and our environment.
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one
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one
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, some people when they find the prices increase may it will help them to stop buy
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buying
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the solution
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, prohibited smoking in public area
and closed restaurants and any places Fix the agreement mistake
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them
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increasing
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person
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a person
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who
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understanding
it
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rethinking
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smokers
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