Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest?

There is no doubt these days that smoking become very a common habit. The question is, why we should be concerned about
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and what
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I am going to discuss the effects of smoking and how to solve
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cause
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serious issues
on
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the
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health and
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financial status.
Firstly
, cigarettes contain toxic materials
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negatively on
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the rate incident of sudden death among young people is strongly
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of
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nicotine
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smoke release
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toxic materials
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air
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, which lead to pollution and impact negatively
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, these habits and
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addictive
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to
buy
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cigarettes daily base leads to
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money
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Therefore
, smoking is
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habit
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destroy their lung, money and our environment.
No
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on
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can deny the fact of
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impacts of smoking,
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assesst
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Governments should
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emphasis
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on several
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such
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the
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prices and
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place
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that
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allowed
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smoking.
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, some people when they find the prices increase may it will help them to stop
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it. Limited places that allowed smoking
also
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, prohibited smoking in public
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and closed restaurants and any places
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children inside
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Moreover
,
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awareness about the risk of smoking as research
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could be the best method to stop smoking habits. To be more specific,
person
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when
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understand
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consequences
it
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will help to
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about certain behaviour. In conclusion, it is evident that smoking brings sickness and poor
for
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the smoker
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smoker
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. Government ensure steps are taken to prevent
this
phenomenon
from deteriorating future.
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