You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - Explain why you would like the job - give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ - say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter in regard to the advert published in TBT magazine that, you are looking for a babysitter for your child. My name is pooja and I would like like to apply for

this

vacancy .

First

of all , I was working as a teacher in a primary school in India for almost 10 years and used to look after children after school at day boarding and I have pretty good experience of taking care of toddlers and teenagers. So I hope I will be a suitable person for

this

job as I can help your children with their studies as well. As my kids are grown up now and busy with their studies and job , I spent most of the time sitting at home or in the library. sometimes , I

also

go out for a walk with my friends but

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want to utilize my time in a better way. As I was already worked in

this

field and am

also

passionate about

this

I can choose

this

carrier in Australia

also

. I have attached my resume for reference and I hope to hear from you back soon. Yours faithfully Pooja Raikwar

Submitted by pooja.raikwar27 on Wed Oct 26 2022

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The Greeting

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