In today’s society, both Western medicine and traditional complementary forms of medicines’ are now widely known and used. The effectiveness of these kinds of treatment is determined by the patient’s mental attitude towards it. To what extent you agree or disagree?

It is well known that when
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is not feeling well that time medicine work according to the mental strength of
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. It
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on
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interest
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interest
that which
medicines
we prefer. A pool of thoughts says that
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medicine
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better. On other hand, a group of people
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claim
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claim
that
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homoeopathy
homoeopathic
homeopathics
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homoeopathic
is
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better. I firmly stand with
halopethic
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allopathic
medicines
because they are invented according to the current
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situation
sitution
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situation
of diseases and
also
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characterised
characterized
according to age.
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, traditional
medicines
take a lot of time to recover the
body
but many diseases
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allow us
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time.
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we need new
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vaccination
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vaccinations
which support
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problem
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. In
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homeopathics
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homoeopathic
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completely
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and
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medicines
save
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.Apart from it, our mind
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with
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medicines
and that great faith toward the
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medicines
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medicine
recovered
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with the speed of
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in science which is
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and they have
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believe
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in
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invented
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compare
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to traditional and as earlier mentioned mental acceptance of medicine is
also
important to regain
body
strength. So, we prefer helopethic. In
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, which
medice
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medicine
should prefer
also
depend on
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the patient
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as well and if he
have
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faith in tablets and syrup
then
only can get
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result. In the era of science
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medicines
have
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platform
compare
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to traditional.
This
is the only reason to stand with
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notion.
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