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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment what damage does plastics do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem

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Nowadays, our
environment
 suffers because of
heavy
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 usage of non-recycle
plastic
. These
plastic
bags
,
plastic
 bottles and
plastic
 packaging
are
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significantly
damage
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damaging
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 our
environment
.
In
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This
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this
 essay, discuss what
are
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apply
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the
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apply
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damages happen
on
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to
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 the
environment
 after
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the uses
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uses
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use
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 of
plastic
 and what
are
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is
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the
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apply
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action required from the government as well as humans to lower the use of
plastic
.
Firstly
, there are two types of plastics are available in the market. One is
recyclable
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the recyclable
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 and
second
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the second
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 one is non-recyclable.
These non-recyclable
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This non-recyclable plastic
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plastic
 in form of
plastic
bags
, bottles and
foods
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food
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 packaging
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are use
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use
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used
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 in our daily life.
Peoples
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People
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 are not doing proper disposal.
Peoples
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People
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 are thrown
plastic
product
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products
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 on
ground
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the ground
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,
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apply
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 so that it is able to cause
a
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ground pollution. It is creating a big problem to grow trees and plants on those lands.
Secondly
, while it is manufactured that it
is create
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creates
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 fumes and
that
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those
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 fumes come
to
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into
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 the atmosphere and it
create
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creates
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 air pollution. These two major problems will affect our
environment
. What are the steps required to lower
this
 pollution for
environment
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the environment
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?
First
, humans need to get
awareness
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aware
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for
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of
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disposal
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the disposal
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 of non-recyclable
plastic
.
Also
,
instead
 of using
plastic
bags
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,bags
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 they can use paper
bags
 or cotton
bags
.
Secondly
,
government
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the government
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 has to focus on using natural resources for
manufactured
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manufacturing
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of
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apply
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bags
 and
also
 provide proper
solution
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solutions
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of
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for
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 disposable. In conclusion, nowadays using of
plastic
product
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products
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that
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apply
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is the main reason for
damage
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the damage
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of
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to
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 the
environment
. Awareness and proper
disposable
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disposal
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 of the only solution to
reduce
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reducing
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damage
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the damage
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of
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environment
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the environment
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 as well as global warming.
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