Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture & character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or not?

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In today’s ever-changing society,fashion has become a huge part of

this

generation’s lifestyle.While many argue

that is

it easy to ascertain someone’s background and beliefs from the way they dress,others contradict

this

.I partially agree and disagree with

this

notion for the reasons that will be addressed in

this

essay

Firstly

,In some religious cultures,people believe that their appearance is a reflection of their faith.

For instance

,in most Moslem and Jewish societies ,the more they wear certain clothes ,like wearing a hijab ,the better they’re deemed to be holier.

Therefore

,in these societies and many others around the world, one's culture can be easily determined.

However

,it can be very impossible to arrive at a conclusion on a person’s beliefs based on their attire code.

This

is because people wear various outfits based on many reasons like occasion, the kind of job they do or weather conditions.

For example

,a person working in a hospital is mostly seen wearing a lab coat and scrubs .Due to their appearance alone,we cannot ascertain their cultural identity. To sum it up,In as much as in many societies it is easy to derive a person’s cultural beliefs based on their choice of outfits ,we cannot always judge a book by its cover.Other things need to be considered to make an informed conclusion.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture & character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or not?

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