You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery scholl. In your letter, Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how muchcooking you've done since the source suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Mr John, I am Nikhil Dhaygude and I recently completed your course on making home-cooked food tastier and healthier. I am writing

this

letter in response to the feedback requested on it.

Firstly

, I thoroughly enjoyed the course. I have become highly knowledgeable on how to make a home-cooked meal taste as good as a restaurant one and keep it healthier at the same time.As I found it very useful, I will recommend it to each of my friends.

Additionally

, since I attended your class, I have started sharing cooking duties with my wife. In fact, I am happy to share that I cook at least once a day on all the days of the week. Needless to say,

this

has made my better half very happy.

However

, I want to suggest that you should offer more kinds of courses. You can have classes on different kinds of cuisines, vegan recipes and how to make healthy meals appealing to young children.

Although

it may be difficult, you can conduct classes for young chefs. I sincerely hope you implement some of my suggestions. I cannot wait to attend another one of your classes. Yours sincerely, Nikhil Dhaygude.

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