You want to sell your Laptop. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Explain why you are selling the Laptop • Describe the Laptop. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.

Dear Bob, I hope you are well; you said you were interested in buying a DELL Inspiron

last

week. I just wanted to let you know that I’ve decided to sell my laptop. I bought my DELL Inspiron laptop three months ago, so it’s still in perfect condition. I am selling it because I just started work at Google, and they have issued everyone in the RnD department free brand new ASUS Chrome books, which I think is much better for me; it

also

has more features for what I need to do. My DELL Inspiron has the new core i7 processor, so it’s speedy, lightweight, and has 13-hour battery life. It has a 17inch screen and an HD webcam. It contains the latest software

such

as Photoshop, Word, PowerPoint, and Garage band. There are no scratches, and it looks new. If you are still interested, I’m free

Monday morning, June 11th, at 10 am,

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Tuesday afternoon, June 12th, between 2 pm and 5 pm. Hope to hear from you soon. Regards Ray

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

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