Criminality rates have been escalating in urban areas. What are the reasons? What solutions could be implemented?

Criminality is a big problem in urban
areas
, because of more population than in remote
areas
. It is very easy for
areas
with a large number of
people
to commit
crime
Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
show examples
as it takes longer for authorities to
finally
make arrests,
for instance
, there are approximately 2 million
people
in Limpopo's remote
areas
many of them know each other in their own communities which make it very difficult for the members of the community to commit any
crime
unlike in the Limpopo urban area with approximately 4 million citizens. Another reason is urban
areas
are where
people
come to work and earn money to take care of families which is why it is a target area for criminals.They rob
people
of their earnings and material possessions,
Also
in Urban
areas
Add a comma
,areas
show examples
people
try to make ends meet and sometimes fail ,
however
, they become victims of drugs
hence
the town
areas
result in a rise of too many drugs and drug dealers.Lack of jobs and poverty is other reasons why
people
turn to criminality, in a well-functioning nation with less unemployment rate the public will not resort to
crime
. For ,example Switzerland is a very well-governed country with fewer unemployed
people
,crowds leave cars unlocked and unattended and no one care to highjack cars because the majority of
people
can actually afford a decent life in that country. In my conclusion ,the politicians and ruling parties play a huge part in avoiding crimes in a nation, a well-governed country with less poverty, and no corruption and looting of public funds is a solution to
crime
problems.
Submitted by tsungaimukozho on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

What to do next:
Look at other essays: