More and more countries have a problem with plastic waste, polluting the countryside and oceans. What problems does it cause? How can these problems be solved?

In
this
contemporary epoch,
plastic
usage is increasing at an alarming rate and its deleterious effects have become a
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controversial
controverial
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controversial
argument. Whilst some proponents claim that
the
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plastic
material is considered a beneficial invention. some opponents and I hold a diverse stance. In
this
essay, the detrimental outcomes along with the possible solutions will be
further
explained. to
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embark
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on, despite the fact that
the
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plastic
bags and carriers are paramount in
the
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daily life, they still have negative impacts on the local ecosystem, and they can harm
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aquastic
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aquatic
animals.
This
means that when
plastic
wastes
buried
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in
soil
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or thrown into oceans, they will enter
food
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chain, and cause
plethora
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of life-threatening diseases, or even death. an eminent example is a hungry sea turtle which may mistake a transparent bag for jellyfish and eat it, so it will choke on
plastic
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a plastic
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bag, and painfully die.
Therefore
, what can be said is that
plastic
containers are not biodegradable, and it may take
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hundreds
hudreds
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hundreds
of years to decompose into pieces.
Thus
, it should be restricted.
Furthermore
, authorities are in charge of mitigating
this
dilemma
,
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and legislating some restricted rules to curb its harmful
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consequences
cosequences
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consequences
.
In other words
, if
government
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launches awareness-raising campaigns concerning the availability of environmentally friendly replacements, the
overconsmption
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overconsumption
of
plastic
carriers will be controlled.
This
can be witnessed by Germany, which has the highest rate of recycling globally, where more than half of its wastes have been recycled and manufactured.
accordingly
, in a final analysis, oceans' marine life and soil have borne the brunt of the pollution because of
plastic
refuse, and state involvement is a panacea for
this
dilemma. In conclusion, after
this
essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, it can be reiterated that not only do harsh punishments conserve natural habitat, but
also
they decrease the morbirates. Eventually, I am convinced that without constructing
plastic
banks for
plastic
recycling, oceans and land could not have been preserved.
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