You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbor to come

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Dear Mr Wong, I hope you are doing well and I am writing

this

letter to invite you to our housewarming party on Sunday. I am pooja , your new neighbour, I just moved into house 18C with my family .As we just moved into our new home , we are planning to organise a housewarming party and would like to invite you and your family for the same . The event will be started at 7:00PM and will continue till 11:00PM.

First

there will be a get together following by dinner at 8:30PM. After dinner we have arranged a music concert. , so it might be a bit disturbing for you due to noise or music, as we have invited quite a lot of people. I apologise for the inconvenience you will bear. I will be genuinely pleased if you accept my invitation. Yours Faithfully, Pooja

Submitted by pooja.raikwar27 on Mon Sep 19 2022

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical resource: 9.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 8.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbor to come

Word Count

The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is better for young to get an advice from old people than young people. Do you agree or disagree

In some countries, the number of people visiting art galleries is declining. What are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem?

Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree?

The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?