Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation. Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

All around the
world
,
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international
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internationals
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international
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sporting
events
are very well appreciated by many
people
and it is an ideal opportunity to show the
world
the qualities of hosting a nation.
However
, some
people
believe that these
events
are mainly a large unjustified expense. In the following paragraphs, I will give my opinions about the pros and cons of
this
statement.
First
, sporting is
distraction
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for
people
. Even though some
people
do not practice sport,
but
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their hobbies are watching the English football league,
world
cup,
Olympic
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and Olympic
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games. I believe that these activities should be promoted as
people
enjoy themselves watching these tournaments.
Moreover
, it creates social
gathering
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gatherings
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as well,
for example
, when there is the
world
football cup, we invite friends to watch the final match.
Additionally
, when an athlete represents his
country
in the International games, it does hot only show the pride of his nation, but
it
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also
promotes the
country
's popularity. Inadvertently, it is true that organising big international
sport
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events
are extremely costly due to the grandiose standards they want to show all the time to the audience. Perhaps, it would have been a good idea, while organising
such
events
, they collect money for ONGs.
For example
, twenty
percent
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of tickets sold could be contributed to poor
people
.
Finally
, when sports are organised internationally, the culture of different counties are shared among the athletes,
thus
friendship and peace are
also
created.
Additionally
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the
country
hosting these
events
get the opportunity to share its culture internationally but
also
it is an opportunity to boost
up
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the economy of the
country
with tourists coming to attend the match. In conclusion, we have observed that the advantages of international sports
events
are more significant
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that
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than
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having
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drawbacks.
Personally
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these organisations should continue to be enhanced to keep sport live in all
culture
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cultures
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.
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