Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people think it is necessary, but others hold that it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

In the 21st century, the world has become a global village .Due to inflation, nothing comes cheap
therefore
people
turn into human machines to earn money to survive . One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of
people
believing that directors of big companies are paid more than the regular staff. The assertion seems quite controversial across the globe. Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different
people
. A good count of
people
believes that it's beneficial while others claim that it is unfair to the employees. Whether to agree or not it's a tough-provoking question. As far as I can see it's more justified to agree with folks who thought it is necessary to pay high to the directors. In the
further
essay , I will not only shed light on the issue but
also
elaborate on my point of view regarding the statement.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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