The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the
water
consumption for household, industry, and agricultural purposes
in San Diego, California, and the world as a whole.
Overall
, water
for residential use
dominates among other sectors in both San Diego and California figures, while
the agriculture segment has the biggest percentage in global use
.
San Diego County residents use
most of their water
usage for housing needs, at three-fourths among other purposes
, which is followed by industrial demand for about a third of that. The remaining percentage of that was utilized for agricultural purposes
at exactly 17%. In contrast
, this
segment ranks first among other proportions of worldwide use
, at 69%.
The other global water
consumption set for residents’ needs, reaching the lowest number among other fields, accounted for only below a tenth, which is one-sixth of world industrial usage. California is the only region that has slightly the same percentages in each field as residential purposes
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it is followed by agriculture at 28%.Submitted by IELTS_8 on
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