Write a letter to the organizer of an annual festival that you attended last year. Include - Feedback about last year - An offer to volunteer - Questions about the festival

#organizer #year #feedback #offer #volunteer #questions

Dear Sir or Madam,

This

is Ahmad who attended the festival which was organized

last

year. I am writing

this

letter to express my desire to take part in your team. In the beginning,

last

year, I attended the festival which was held by the institute, and I would like to express my paramount feelings about participating in

this

event. It was a well-organized event with a plethora of activities. The

second

point I would like to talk about is that I am expressing my desire to take part in your team, and I do not need any money. I acquire plenty of skills, especially interpersonal skills which will help me with dealing with different types of people.

Finally

, when is the festival starting

this

year ?

Additionally

, Where is it going to take place ?

Moreover

, How many tickets are issued ?

lastly

, Where can I buy them ? I look forward to hearing from you, and if there is any update, please, call me as soon as possible. Sincerely, Ahmad Mohamed Sayed

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Write a letter to the organizer of an annual festival that you attended last year. Include - Feedback about last year - An offer to volunteer - Questions about the festival

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

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Online shopping is replacing offline or shopping from stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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