You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter – explain why you would like the job – give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ – say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter in a response to your job advertisement for a babysitter in the Child Responsibility magazine. I am doing graduation in Electronics at Australian University and since the pandemic has hit the country my classes are completely online. So, I would like to have a job so that I can take the burden of my expenses while I am studying here.

Firstly

, I am the eldest kid in my family and I am quite experienced in taking liability for children both my parents used to work while my siblings were young but I was the one who took the burden for them.

In addition

, I am a very cool person in nature who will always take care of your minor with utmost sincerity and honesty which is in my friendly nature and your juvenile will enjoy my company. Since I am studying through online classes, half of my days and weekends are free. I will visit the beautiful beaches around the city because I am a beach lover. I would like to invite your family to join me during these trips and it would be great to visit these places as one family. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John Seena

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