You recently attended a series of English lessons in a language school. However, you were unhappy with the teaching quality. Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter: explain why you chose to study English at the school describe the problems you had with the lessons suggest how the classes could be improved

#series #english #lessons #language #school #quality #director #study #classes

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with English

classes

being thought at school. I was referred to

this

school by my family friend stating that it's the best.

However

, I did not feel the same after attending

classes

for over a month. To provide a background, I am a non-native speaker of the English language. I explained

this

at the time of joining and I was promised that it will be considered while taking

classes

however

, The

classes

are being thought at the expert level which is very tough for me to get up to speed.

In addition

to that, I was not explained well in case of any doubts asked.

Also

, the explanation was not in a detailed fashion. It would be so helpful if they could provide me with some assistance in answering my queries and move me to a class where most students are non-native speakers.

This

would help me in achieving more scores and understanding the language in depth. Looking forward to a response from you. yours faithfully, Vivek V

Submitted by vivekv4 on Sat Sep 10 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical resource: 9.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 8.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

Word count

Become Premium

Check as many essays as you want
Analyze highlighted mistakes
Use the built-in grammar checker
Discover your weaknesses
Get suggestions to get a higher score
Browse the history of checked essays
14-day money back guarantee

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5.5
band
It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them to learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
It is an ongoing debate that, it is necessary to inculcate the distinction between right and wrong in the adolescents. To teach such thing, many intellectuals agree to use the punishment as a tool. If I asked, I partially agree with the above notion. The parents and tutors can mould the pupils by continuous motivation for the moral virtues.
7.5
band
Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is a controversial discussion about which subject should be of the greatest importance in the school curriculum. Some believe that History is the important one while others think due to the modern world, Technology and Science need more consideration. In my idea, all school subjects are essential for pupils without any prioritization.
6.5
band
In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work?
We live in a changing world, one that needs adaptable students who are ready to deal with the challenges of the communications age. However, we must not overlook the fact that students need to have some practical skills which will also help them in the future. It is, therefore, the responsibility of schools to provide a balance between the two.
<4
band
School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Whilst in recent days teenagers are getting over-dependent on technology for academic purposes over the basic study skills is the cause of concern for the society. Notwithstanding some merits of the former view. I agree with the statement of re-deploying the fundamental methods of teaching. However, there are some benefits of introducing digital platforms in the academics domain. Explicated below is my belief and the basis of my belief.
<4
band
Many people think that important things in life are mostly free or can’t be bought. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
Majority of people believe that money are much more important because it can make life more easily. I totally disagree with this point of view, there are much more things are important in life which money can’t bought.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work?

School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that important things in life are mostly free or can’t be bought. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.