Influence of human beings on the worlds ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. Causes and solutions

Nowadays , numerous species are being lost by environmental problems and
also
many more will become extinct so
this
essay illustrates the reason and solution for the above statement.
First
of all , people are hunting animals due to get their expensive things like leathers , nails and teeth ,
on the contrary
, they do not think that one day it will cease to exist,
for example
, a number of wildlife species , we can see only in the zoo ,
consequently
, it disturbs the process of the environment.
Moreover
, a plethora of people's mistakes, the situation like wildfire is created in the forest ,
in addition
, it harmful all over the wildfire , who lives in the forest ,
such
as
last
year , it was created by humans in the African forest and it was started by just one piece of cigarette ,
as a result
, which hunted thousands of animals and some of them were very rare to see.
On the other hand
, the government should work on it and the area where animals live should be restricted to the public ,
for instance
, currently , a number of areas are there , which is not allowed to go people ,
as a result
, wildlife lives peacefully without us.
Secondly
, whenever wildfires start at that time fire workers come immediately to solve
this
problem ,
for example
, many countries have a good fire system to stop and
as a result
, they can easily stop and save them. In conclusion , it is not only the government's responsibility they are
also
our part of life to save them and take care of the environment and everyone must not disturb their life.
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