You recently bought an item of clothing from a shop. You discovered that it had a fault and returned it to the shop for replacement or refund. However, the assistant told you that this was against the store's policy.

Write a letter to the store manager, explaining the problems you have had. Ask  for a refund or exchange on the item.

Dear Sir, The purpose of writing
this
letter is to divert your attention toward the recent incident that happened with me. I came
last
Saturday to your shop too had shopping for my marriage reception party because I got a reference from my close friend. I bought so many items from your store including the Anarkali suit, sandals and some accessories. All of these things, I suppose to wear on my special day which happened yesterday night.
However
, I got a defective piece from your shop and did not notice it at the same time while I was buying it. It has a big hole on the backside of the dupatta. Yesterday night when I was about the wear it to the reception party, my friend noticed, Afterwards I called your shop for returning
this
item with a refund or replacement of other but they directly denied to accept that as they mentioned it is fully against their store policy. That’s the reason, I am writing
this
letter to you please exchange or refund
this
item as soon as possible. I will be really appreciate Yours faithfully, Kulwinder Kaur
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