Some people say industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty, while some believe it should be stopped due to environmental problem it creates. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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World, Industries play a crucial role in the Economy of every Country and
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opportunities for young ones. A few
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the issues of scarcity.While
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others argue that it's very devastating for natural habitats.In my
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