Many Offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishments. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle these problems.

İ

t

is noticeable that many

offenders

commit more crimes after serving the

first

punishments

. İn my opinion ,

punishments

which needs can'

t

be given properly by

governments

, and

thus

crime

commit

rates

increase gradually . Many

offenders

who still continue to commit

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crime

crimes

srime

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crimes

will be saved from

this

problem if

governments

will provided seminars about crimes to

offenders

or

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if

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governments

will prepare jails properly

to

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offenders

.

Firstly

,

punishments

which needs can'

t

be given properly by

governments

, and

causes

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cause

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crime

commit

rates

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increase gradually . Many countries struggle with these problems anymore .

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, a man will become

a

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guilty when he committed

crime

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a crime

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and afterwards,

government

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the government

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will give

a

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punishment

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punish

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,and

therefore

this

punish won'

t

be

properly

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for guilty . Another point to consider is that

governments

should

be

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provide solutions properly for

offenders

. Because many

offenders

still

crime

commit and causes much trouble

such

as death ,

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thieves

thiefness

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and thiefness

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.

For instance

,

offenders

can be saved if

government

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the government

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will set up seminars about crimes , and

thus

crime

commit

rates

will decrease in countries

where

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that

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have

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apply

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the

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apply

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offenders

. İn conclusion ,

punishments

which needs can'

t

be given properly by

governments

, and causes

crime

commit

rates

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to

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increase gradually . İn my opinion ,

governments

should

be

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apply

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provide solutions properly for

offenders

,

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apply

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and

thus

commit

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commitment

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rates

will decrease in countries

where

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that

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have

the

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apply

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offenders

.