A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

Dear Liza, I hope you're well. I heard you're going on a camping
trip
this
summer and wanted some suggestions for the vacation.
First
, I think you will have a fantastic
trip
because the location is far from the city so you can enjoy some isolation.
Secondly
, you would be surrounded by nature to have bonfires and music. On top of that, I wanted to tell you about a few problems with a camping
trip
.
First
, the weather could be warm, so you might have difficulty falling asleep. On top of that, there are no convenience stores nearby, so you can't grab supplies or food. I wanted to let you know that I want to accompany you on
this
trip
. I think it's a good bonding opportunity and will
also
benefit my mental health.
Lastly
, coming along with you will allow me to explore other areas on the
trip
. I am hoping to hear from you soon. Take care, Imtiaz Chowdhury
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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