A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer
Dear Liza,
I hope you're well.
I heard you're going on a camping
trip
this
summer and wanted some suggestions for the vacation.
First
, I think you will have a fantastic trip
because the location is far from the city so you can enjoy some isolation. Secondly
, you would be surrounded by nature to have bonfires and music.
On top of that, I wanted to tell you about a few problems with a camping trip
. First
, the weather could be warm, so you might have difficulty falling asleep. On top of that, there are no convenience stores nearby, so you can't grab supplies or food.
I wanted to let you know that I want to accompany you on this
trip
. I think it's a good bonding opportunity and will also
benefit my mental health. Lastly
, coming along with you will allow me to explore other areas on the trip
.
I am hoping to hear from you soon.
Take care,
Imtiaz ChowdhurySubmitted by imtiazedubd on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite