Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution prob- lems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Above all, pollution and,

consequently

, growing

traffic

are the most important problems happening nowadays in any city. We all have lived the

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consequences

consecuences

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consequences

of those problems

through

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one way or another.

For instance

, we are

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seriously

seriusly

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seriously

facing climate change, which is made

by

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mainly

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petrol. Another example is the

traffic

that we go through every day wasting a lot of time. There are many solutions to resolve

this

situation

such

as

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increase

increasing

increas

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increasing

the

price

of

pretrol

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petrol

,

promote

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the

use

of public

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transport

trasport

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transport

,

prohibit

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the

use

of certain

vehicles

which have already been used enough, etc. In the

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we are going to assess whether increasing the

price

of petrol is a good idea to stop the

growing

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of

traffic

and pollution or it is not the best.

First

, we must agree

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fact that if the

price

of

gas

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increase,

less

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people

is

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going to

use

private

vehicles

;

therefore

, if it

heppens

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happens

, the demand

of

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public

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transport

trasport

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transport

would increase. So, we can be sure

about

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that

this

would work.

However

, it would

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no

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be the best solution as the public

vehicles

are not

apropiate

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appropriate

because Peru does not have a competent

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infrastructure

infraestructure

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infrastructure

. The other solution which I consider more

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appropriate

apropiate

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appropriate

is not increasing the prices

,

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but promoting and upgrading the public service.

Thus

, the

use

of it would be based on the own people's

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initiative

iniciative

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initiative

and, in the same way, not

a

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increase

of

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price

. Concluding, Reducing

the

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people's petrol

consume

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consumption

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by increasing

the

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prices is not the best solution

for

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pollution and

traffic

growing

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.

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Consequently

, it is better to upgrade the public

vehicles

and

service

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because that would promote the demand

of

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it

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them

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, and, above all,

this

investment would try to reach a world without global warming and horrible

traffic

.