The use of recreational drogs is on the increase, especially among young people. Describe the reasons for this worrying issue and provide suggestions to minimize it.

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The use of legal and illegal drugs

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becoming more and more common in many countries. Recently, some countries have sounded

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about

this

issue. In

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essay, we will explain many of the reasons for

this

issue and give some solutions. Undoubtedly, people in all modern

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societies

socities

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societies

use drugs, but today's youth are

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experimenting

experiencing

both legal and illegal, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.

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, surely there are several factors that help to extend

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phenomenon, the major one that has harmful effects on

youngsters

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physical and mental health.

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, they will not be able to contribute to their society، which leads to a negatively impact on the country's economy and productivity rate. The other thing I should say, is the increase in the number of unemployed and jobless among youths, means disappointment and frustration feeling.

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The use of recreational drogs is on the increase, especially among young people. Describe the reasons for this worrying issue and provide suggestions to minimize it.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweight the disadvantages?