The use of recreational drogs is on the increase, especially among young people. Describe the reasons for this worrying issue and provide suggestions to minimize it.

The use of legal and illegal drugs
are
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becoming more and more common in many countries. Recently, some countries have sounded
alarmed
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about
this
issue. In
this
essay, we will explain many of the reasons for
this
issue and give some solutions. Undoubtedly, people in all modern
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societies
socities
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societies
use drugs, but today's youth are
expermenting
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experimenting
experiencing
both legal and illegal, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
In addition
, surely there are several factors that help to extend
this
phenomenon, the major one that has harmful effects on
youngsters
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physical and mental health.
Therefore
, they will not be able to contribute to their society، which leads to a negatively impact on the country's economy and productivity rate. The other thing I should say, is the increase in the number of unemployed and jobless among youths, means disappointment and frustration feeling.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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