Nowadays, some people believe advertising is useful and informative. Others believe advertising gives false information about the products and increase the price of goods.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In spite of the fact that
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is undergoing various changes in recent
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, business remains the most heatedly discussed
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, especially the
one
related to advertising. Some people argue that advertising is conducive to
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the
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useful and informative
information
, while others believe that not only
advertising
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does advertising
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gives
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false
information
but
also
raises the price of commodities. From my perspective, advertising
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pros and cons. When it comes to
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the merits
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of advertising, there is no doubt that it provides us
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variety of useful
information
for our reference. It can be divided into television ads, internet ads and market-oriented ads and so on. When individuals
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for the products
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they
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, they
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to look
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commodity ad because it can show you a comprehensive introduction of goods, which may help you place an order without
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. So,
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this
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informative advertising
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good for shopping.
However
, every coin has two sides. When we browse the internet, some websites will
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up the false
information
of
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about
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products which may deceive you,
also
with the growth of
price
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the price
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.
For example
, when the young or the aged
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the
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shopping website like Amazon in order to purchase provisions, the pictures or videos of food are not the same as the real
one
at all. It is obvious that the public will be deceived by
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this false information
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information
, thereby spending redundant money on it. Given the above argument, it is reasonable to conclude that advertising is a double-edged sword which
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profound influence for either good or harm on
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internet users. What’s more, everyone should learn to distinguish the false
one
from the real
one
.
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