A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter • describe what this book was about • explain how this book influenced you • say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding the
book
which significantly changed my career. Its name is 'Clean Code' and is written by a former software developer known as Uncle Bob. I would like to explain more about it.
This
book
covers various methodologies and software development skills.
Therefore
, the reader would be able to learn how to write a readable and organized piece of code which is a very important skill.
In addition
, the subjects of the
book
influenced my professional career by allowing me to improve my abilities to produce faster and
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applications.
Although
it seems a long text with a variety of examples, it definitely assists the people who work in computer
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fields.
Therefore
, I recommend the
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students and
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professionals which gives them a broader view and allows them to think twice during programming a computer.
Hence
, following its
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will lead to a more structured result. Sincerely yours, Parham
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