In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use their money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Government should impose additional

taxes

on the owners of private cars to fund the public infrastructure.

Although

this

measure offers several benefits, the drawbacks should

also

be kept

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consideration.

This

essay will discuss both merits and demerits of taxing private

vehicles

. On the one hand, Government can achieve several benefits by introducing heavy

taxes

.

First

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this

would decrease traffic delays by limiting

volume

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the volume

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of new

vehicles

on the roads as people will be encouraged to use public transportation.

Secondly

,

this

action will help in

clean

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environment as

less

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vehicles

means

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less emission of CO2 which is

major

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cause of

air

pollution.

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, the

air

quality of Lahore city is deteriorated

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up to

upto

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an alarming situation because of

uncontrollable

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increase

of

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traffic.

Example

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has a negative tone; whereas the explanation is positive.

For example

, Singapore’s

air

quality index is mostly high because the administration there have enforced

taxes

.

On the other hand

, imposing

taxes

will have some worst effects by implementing

this

measure people will be travelling mostly by public transport which takes a lot of their time as compared to owned

vehicle

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vehicles

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.[contradictive point with the previous paragraph]

Moreover

, as

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industry is a multi-million huge investment globally, falling in sales will end in unemployment in

this

sector. The economy will

also

witness shock as

this

sector is an important pillar of any economy. In conclusion, the benefits of imposing massive taxation

of

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private

vehicles

outnumbered the drawbacks of

this

solution.[opinion] The major concerns like interrupted traffic flow and

air

pollution might minimize by these

taxes

however

, the time travel might increase along with

decline

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in

the

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employment which might affect the economy