A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: - describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team - summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts - say how you think the company should spend some mone

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope my letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter regarding the feedback that you ask us for. Please be informed that I would like to take

this

opportunity to thank you in advance for the donation either for sports or concerts. Donating either of the two is a big help for us.

Firstly

, sponsoring sports teams. Through

this

, the youngsters will become physically fit and

this

will be a big help to move them away from drugs or any bad activities.

Secondly

, the concerts will give them time to enjoy life and embrace

this

once-in-a-lifetime experience since most of the tickets for the concert are very costly.

However

, I would prefer to donate to sports activities.

This

is the best option, surely, your money will not be wasted. I believe we really need

this

kind of physical activity. I appreciated it if you could consider my suggestion. Should you have any concerns regarding my letter, please do let me know. Yours faithfully, Marivel Guza

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