You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery scholl. In your letter, Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how muchcooking you've done since the source suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regards to expressing my opinion about a short-term cooking
course
that I registered for in May 2021. I would like to say that I enjoyed the good manners of the professor who taught us carefully.
In addition
,we enjoyed learning international recipes
such
as European cuisine, especially Italian and Spanish. After completing the
course
,I have been working in an international restaurant where I am responsible for cooking Asian cuisine.So,these days,I can prepare the Italian food that I learned during the
course
. I suggest you for the
next
class,If it would be possible,add an Indian recipe,which I think will be a tempting offer for the participants. Thank you for conducting
such
a useful cookery
course
, Yours faithfully, Mohammad
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